MaiDer Vang
Ms. Peifer
Creative Writing
The story about the coat is very amazing to me. I believe it is wrong to act very mean to a person until that person gets a new coat. I believe *A deserves better. It is very sad how he earns very little and he tries to not spend any money. Not wanting to buy a new coat and just want to patch up all the torns in his coat. I also thinks that it is very sad that he get beat up and rob by the nightguard's friend. It is nice to feel like you are back in one place, by having everyone admires you but it seems fake to me because everyone starts to be nice to *A just because he has a new nice coat. If he never brought a coat then everyone still still be mean to him. Sometimes the story gets confusing to me at first because of the long weird names. Then as I read the story, i start to memorize the names and understand the story a little. But the story is still confusing to me because the writer uses a lot of details, some times I think that there are just too much detail. But there are time when the details helps me to get a good image.This story is a good story to teach us a lesson about getting new items so i believe this is a good story to share with many people.
Wednesday, May 27, 2009
Sweat
MaiDer Vang
Ms. Peifer
Creative Writing
Sweat
this story is a little confusing to me but i like how strong the black woman is. Even thought her husband is a bad husband, she still works hard to earn a living for herself. Her husband cheats on ehr with another woman who has been in town for three month. He even beat her up just two month after they got married. That was the sadest part of the story to me. What i dont like about the story is that they uses confusing language for dialogue so that is what confuses me when they talk. What i also like about the story is that the black woman is a hard working woman tgat still stay with her husband and even went through all his bad attitude. What i like about the staoy is that the writer have a very good theme that i like about the story. To me, I think that the theme is, even though you are married and are going through hardship, never give up your life. Why i believe that is the themem is because i think that the black lady feel regret that she marries a man she didnt love naymore, she has already made that choice with her life and just have to go on. So this story seem to have a lesson to teach us to get to know the person before you make a life with and to also be strong through all hardship.
Ms. Peifer
Creative Writing
Sweat
this story is a little confusing to me but i like how strong the black woman is. Even thought her husband is a bad husband, she still works hard to earn a living for herself. Her husband cheats on ehr with another woman who has been in town for three month. He even beat her up just two month after they got married. That was the sadest part of the story to me. What i dont like about the story is that they uses confusing language for dialogue so that is what confuses me when they talk. What i also like about the story is that the black woman is a hard working woman tgat still stay with her husband and even went through all his bad attitude. What i like about the staoy is that the writer have a very good theme that i like about the story. To me, I think that the theme is, even though you are married and are going through hardship, never give up your life. Why i believe that is the themem is because i think that the black lady feel regret that she marries a man she didnt love naymore, she has already made that choice with her life and just have to go on. So this story seem to have a lesson to teach us to get to know the person before you make a life with and to also be strong through all hardship.
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