gocoat

MaiDer Vang
Ms. Peifer
Creative Writing

The story about the coat is very amazing to me. I believe it is wrong to act very mean to a person until that person gets a new coat. I believe *A deserves better. It is very sad how he earns very little and he tries to not spend any money. Not wanting to buy a new coat and just want to patch up all the torns in his coat. I also thinks that it is very sad that he get beat up and rob by the nightguard's friend. It is nice to feel like you are back in one place, by having everyone admires you but it seems fake to me because everyone starts to be nice to *A just because he has a new nice coat. If he never brought a coat then everyone still still be mean to him. Sometimes the story gets confusing to me at first because of the long weird names. Then as I read the story, i start to memorize the names and understand the story a little. But the story is still confusing to me because the writer uses a lot of details, some times I think that there are just too much detail. But there are time when the details helps me to get a good image.This story is a good story to teach us a lesson about getting new items so i believe this is a good story to share with many people.