Sweat

MaiDer Vang
Ms. Peifer
Creative Writing

Sweat

this story is a little confusing to me but i like how strong the black woman is. Even thought her husband is a bad husband, she still works hard to earn a living for herself. Her husband cheats on ehr with another woman who has been in town for three month. He even beat her up just two month after they got married. That was the sadest part of the story to me. What i dont like about the story is that they uses confusing language for dialogue so that is what confuses me when they talk. What i also like about the story is that the black woman is a hard working woman tgat still stay with her husband and even went through all his bad attitude. What i like about the staoy is that the writer have a very good theme that i like about the story. To me, I think that the theme is, even though you are married and are going through hardship, never give up your life. Why i believe that is the themem is because i think that the black lady feel regret that she marries a man she didnt love naymore, she has already made that choice with her life and just have to go on. So this story seem to have a lesson to teach us to get to know the person before you make a life with and to also be strong through all hardship.